Can you correct the sentences? Please and thank you!!

I know for number one it's Dear, Mrs. Lamont, since it's a name so the comma goes before it. I'm sorry if I'm wrong
Answer:
1. Dear Mrs. Lamont,
2. Harriet said that you would help me with my report.
3. " Did Juan finish raking your leaves yesterday," asked Mrs. Perez.
4. "Yes," said Mr. Sakamoto, " and he did a fine job."
5. Your friend,
6. Sara Jane said she liked the movie we saw.
7. Jeff wants to know if you will go with him.
8. Zorah shouted, " watch out below!"
9. Who said " give me liberty or give me death?"
10. Dear Senator Smith,
11. Sincerely yours,
12. Did you ask mother if I could stay overnight?
Explanation:
Numbers eight and eleven stay the same
Hope this helps :)